Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to sc

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Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In this day and age, parents are inclined to spend a myriad of time for work so that they can reach prosperity and provide their children with sufficient materials. However, this tendency accidentally leads to the phenomenon that parents suffer from lack of time spent with their children. Facing this problem, some people think they had better guide their children’s schoolwork when they are together, while I believe parents should have fun playing games or sports with their children due to some rational reasons.
The first reason is that sports can help children gain experience of teamwork and competition, which is hard to get at school. With only forty-five minutes for a period, neither do teachers have time to transmit academic knowledge nor teach students soft skills like teamwork. On the contrary, parents get a better opportunity of educating their children's life skills. By playing team sports such as football and basketball with their parents, kids can ascertain how to cooperate with other people to get the best results. This suggests that children will not be baffled when working with others in a career environment, and they will be more confident to dive into competitions. For example, the moments when I played badminton with my parents in the past have excessively urged me to take part in a badminton competition organized by my school.

Secondly, parents should not use their tiny time to talk about stressful school work as it has an adverse impact on children’s mental health. Facing an increasing amount of pressure at school, students are already having a lot of burdens. If parents ask them to continue to study after school, they will produce an emotion of resistance and disbelief; this kind of mentality might put the relationship between parents and children in jeopardy. Moreover, the more people keep doing the same things, the less productive they will be. For instance, if students spent more than five hours studying at school, they would become tired and reluctant to keep learning after getting home.
All things considered, children expect their parents to extract a little time to share stories with them instead of checking their assignments at school inasmuch as it just discourages children from developing.
In conclusion, students should play sports with their parents to upgrade teamwork skills as well as reduce stress.

Average: 8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19689119171 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65029325491 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575129533679 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2800741683 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.375 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354977458424 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111202481744 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651034827657 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189965951042 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740168755937 0.0645574589148 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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