Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why?
So far, it is widely acknowledged that families and friends enjoy spending their free time doing entertainment jobs together, such as watching TV, playing video games or enjoying a great meal together whether they are having it at their houses or at a luxurious restaurant. However, about the last case, some might hold the view that eating meals at home is much more comfortable rather than having to eat their meals outside, while there are waiters serving them all the time. Personally, I contend that eating meals with family members or friends outside at a restaurant or café is actually a much more enjoyable deed. Hereinafter, by alluding to three outstanding reasons, I will shed light on my own perspective.
The first noteworthy point regarding the issue is that having meals outside brings the family and friends the chance in order to spend their time in a diverse place where there are groups of people sitting there and enjoying their food. This, in fact, makes one much more enthusiastic in order to dedicate his time to this special event. To exemplify my very own experience, every time my mother tells me that she intends to buy food from restaurant and to bring it home, I would tell her that it is principally appropriate to spend eating that meal outside, for not only would this give me the chance to enjoy my meal at a different place, but also it would sometimes result in my reunion with familiar acquaintances.
The other axiomatic point regarding the issue is that eating at a restaurant provides one with the opportunity to socialize with different people and meet new faces. For instance, since my mother and I used to go to a restaurant to have dinner most of the time, we practically know everybody who is working there and furthermore, we even were able to find new friends.
Last but not least, usually at a restaurant there are people as waiters who can help one make different decision on the meal he wants to have. Therefore, it gives the customer the ability to get acquainted with new foods and to get to become familiar with the ingredients. For example, my mother and I, having spending most of our time at the aforementioned restaurant, it has given us the chance to a better knowledge about a variety of foreign foods and their ingredients.
To make a long story short, one by choosing restaurants for a place to eat will actually be capable of better enjoying his meals, for not only does it give him the chance to interact with others and to meet different people, but also it results in learning many stuff about a diversity of foods and their ingredients.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, regarding, second, so, then, thus, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2330.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20089285714 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07915327662 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504464285714 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.6835053972 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236770211841 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704685945641 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058669373109 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157705182957 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317346964019 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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