Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently, while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why?
In today's modern and sophisticated world, eating meals play a vital role in people's health. In this connection, each person has a different attitude about the places that they want to eat meals. Although contested by many that the matter of often eating meals at restaurants is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded as both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I concur with the notion that it has benefits for people to eat meals at home, and I will analyze my reasons throughout this essay.
First, the food which is served at home is healthy; thus, it is essential to eat at home to sustain a healthy lifestyle. To be more specific, restaurants prefer their profits, so they do not use fresh materials; however, when people cook meals at home, they can use fresh as well as high nourishing substances. For example, when I eat food at restaurants, I feel stomachache as they do not exploit high-quality materials; for example, they reuse oil to save their money by not purchasing new oil, which is detrimental for health and cause illness like cancer. Moreover, they buy cheap material to be lucrative; therefore, the quality of food is not their priority, and food does not provide enough minerals and vitamins for body.
Second, people will save their money if they eat homemade meals most of the time. To elucidate, restaurants should pay their chef and other workers, leading to increasing the price of food. According to my own experience, I have a restaurant, and every month, I should pay many bills and employers' revenue, so I have defined the price of food fifty percent higher than the situation in which one makes it at home. As a result, people can make their desirable food with lower expenses at home; otherwise, they dissipate money.
To conclude, while there are several arguments on each side, I profoundly believe that eating meals at home can be a plus. Not only do restaurants not serve nourishing food, but they also determine the price of food higher than real worth.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i feel, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87068965517 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70779782199 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557471264368 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6861592024 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.071428571 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36270335743 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12558926787 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541570530301 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215445988188 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368808241973 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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