Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create such records.Which approach do you prefer, and why?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today’s society with the social media platforms being prevalent many people upload their experiences onto these platforms while others don't. I believe that keeping records from different experiences and sharing them with others on social-networking platforms is an act that benefits oneself and others. I will discuss my reasonings for this notion in the following essay.
First, the pictures and videos uploaded allows us to have organized and well-developed shelves of our experiences, making it easier to access when wanting to review particular experiences and even remanence by remembering the times we had during these operations. For example, after finishing a project for a data science competition me and my two other team mates uploaded our experience and even reports of our work onto a social-media platform. After three years I still go and read the reports uploaded at that time to get an inspiration for my new work and every time it brings a smile upon my face, thinking of the hardships of the time we had together and our hard-earned achievements.
Second, even if the records gathered of the experience are accidentally lost, the files are well kept in the sites and can be restored. For example, when someone loses a lot of files from their PCs, leading to losing a big chunk of data and photos with no way of restoring them. If the reports and experiences have been backed up and uploaded into a social-networking site these files can be restored.
Third, when we upload an experience, people with more experience may come forward and comment on our work leading us to improve upon our mistakes, and people with less or no experience can learn from our experience. For example, many students including myself have been agonizing over how to study for the TOEFL test, but there were many others that had uploaded their experiences in social platforms like Instagram this allows many such people to get an idea about where to start their journey towards their intended score.
In conclusion, based on above reasonings I believe sharing and keeping records of experiences in social-networking platforms is a worthwhile and helpful action.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, still, third, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06722689076 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9283138776 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5172242291 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.75 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227724528723 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952489677517 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585000275829 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146340053091 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538806461964 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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