Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, some people like to eat at home and prepare food by themselves,
but others prefer to eat out side in restaurants or at food stands. As far as I am
concerned, I prefer to eat at home.
Of course there are some advantages to eat out. Firstly, restaurants offer a more
comfortable environment to eat and the food there tastes more delicious than
home-cooked meals. In addition, eating at restaurants is a good way of getting
together with friends. People also do not need to worry about washing dishes
and cleaning. For people who are too busy to cook, eating out is certainly an
ideal choice. Furthermore, for people do not know how to cook and do not have
some one to cook for them, eat out seems to be the only choice.
However, I prefer to cook and eat and home. The main reason is that at home,
family members can prepare their meals and enjoying their food together,
which can enhance their relationships. Family members can talk, make jokes
and exchange feelings on current affairs with each other while preparing a meal.
Parents have a chance to communicate with their kids and keep track of what
they are thinking and doing; while children can learn to help with some
household tasks and develop intimacy with their parents. Image that you and
your brothers and sisters help your mother to cook on a weekend, and enjoy the
food later on, and you feel everything is so nice.
Another reason is that eating at home can save money. The same amount of
money that you spend on a meal in a restaurant can buy a lot more foods from a
supermarket. You can use the money saved to buy a new cloth, or attend a
concert.
General speaking, eating out side is comfortable and convenient, but eating at
home has more benefits. I prefer to eat at home.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...o not know how to cook and do not have some one to cook for them, eat out seems to be t...
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Line 28, column 26, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...a concert. General speaking, eating out side is comfortable and convenient, but eati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, so, while, in addition, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66144200627 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49116716761 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526645768025 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.470785991 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6111111111 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.53405017921 529% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448429737681 0.236089414692 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170757033025 0.076458572812 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140587718769 0.0737576698707 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139088948894 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121460113763 0.0645574589148 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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