some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. which do you prefer?
use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, people have various types of physical activities, and these activities consume the body’s energy. For compensating for the loss of energy, we should nourish our body with nutrients. Eating food is the primary way of adding nutritive sources to one's body. There are various choices about where to eat, some people like to eat at home, while others tend to eat at restaurants and food stands. As far as I am concerned, eating at home is a better choice. There are many reasons why I believe so, but among them, the matter of health, costs, and convenience will be discussed hereunder.
The only way that eating would be beneficial, is by eating wholesome food, and only by eat at home, one can be sure about the healthiness of the food and its ingredients. When you cook your food, you buy the ingredient yourself. Therefore you can choose the best and healthiest materials from the market. Also, when you prepare it, you are positive that the meal you are going to eat is completely healthy. On the other hand, when you go to a restaurant, you have no idea where do they buy their material or how they cook the food. For example, all of us have seen that kitchens in some restaurants are very dirty. Also, you don’t know what if the waiter or waitress who brings you your food, sneezed on your food or not.
Second, there is the matter of convenience. When people eat at home, they don’t need to wear formal clothes. They can it in any situation, and wear anything they want. On the other hand, when you go to a restaurant, social convention dictates you to wear decent clothes. Furthermore, when you eat at home, you can play your favorite music, even watch a movie or simply enjoy the silence. But when you go to a restaurant, you cannot choose the music, or sometimes there is too much crowded, that you cannot enjoy your meal at all.
Last but not least, eating at home is much cheaper. When you prepare your food, you buy the ingredients from wholesale stores and sometimes you search for places for lower prices. So when you eat at home you do not have to spend money on anything else. On the other hand, restaurants have to pay for their chefs; their waiters and waitresses; their location; maybe their advertisements and so forth. Consequently, they add those costs to the original cost of the meal. That is why eating at home is much cheaper in comparison to restaurants.
In conclusion, I choose to eat at home rather than at restaurants. Because by doing so, I fell more convenient. Also, expenses will be lower and I can prepare and eat wholesome food. Who can ignore those important advantages and go eat at restaurants?
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...mary way of adding nutritive sources to ones body. There are various choices about w...
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Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... food, you buy the ingredient yourself. Therefore you can choose the best and healthiest ...
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...you search for places for lower prices. So when you eat at home you do not have to spen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57880586591 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470338983051 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5285563418 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.275862069 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.275862069 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.20689655172 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376722801082 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115842330629 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872330631934 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247508139177 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364483160936 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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