Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
If am given with the choice of choosing between home cooked food and restaurant food, I would definite choose home cooked food as it more hygenic and cheaper than the restaurant food.
Nowadays, most of the restaurants have reduced their standard of hygiene inorder to maximise their profit margin. They often use the products of inferior quality and charge us for the premium products. This would be detrimental to our health especially if we continue to eat restaurant food for long period of time. About 2 years, I had ordered one ham burger from one of the well known eatery shops in my area. While consuming burger, I discovered few hair foliciles inside the burger. I was startled by the poor hygienic quality of the restaurant. But, if we prepare our food at home, we can be assured of the hygienic quality which in my view is of vital importance for maintaining good health.
Another reason for preferring home cooked meals is that they are cheaper. Being a college student, I cannot afford to spend hefty amount at the food stands or at restaurants. However, if we prepare our meals at home it would cost nearly half of the what it would cost at restaurant. Hence, home cooked meals allows us to enjoy delicious meal as well also in cuts down our food expenditure.
Lastly, restaurants offers very little flexibility in alterering the reciepie of any standard food item. Conversely, home cooked meals allows us to experiment and explore the vivid varierties of tastes of any standard food item. Furthermore, it enables us to develop our own recipie. My recent reciepe development of Vegan pizza is an apt example to illustrate my point. The local restaurant in my locality doesn't offer vegan pizza. Therefore, I myself tried to develop the reciepe of vegan pizza using spinach, sweet corn and some beans. As a consequence, I was able to develop my customised pizza which otherwise would not have been possible in restaurant or at food stand. Since, home cooking offers more flexibility in preparing the meals based on our interest, I would prefer to cook my food at home.
Although, restaurants foods saves lot of cooking time, home cooked food are good for health, economic in costs and gives us the freedom of developing our own food recipie. Thus, I always prefer to have home cooked food over the restuarnt food.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to home'
Suggestion: to home
...estaurant food, I would definite choose home cooked food as it more hygenic and chea...
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Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ontinue to eat restaurant food for long period of time. About 2 years, I had ordered one ham b...
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Line 2, column 449, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hair seems to be countable; consider using: 'few hairs'.
Suggestion: few hairs
...a. While consuming burger, I discovered few hair foliciles inside the burger. I was star...
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Line 4, column 408, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...nt. The local restaurant in my locality doesnt offer vegan pizza. Therefore, I myself ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.825 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60805962355 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.392605704 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289938639921 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871293930494 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721993146955 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179174165094 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382792614667 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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