Some people prefer to exercise alone, such as running, while others like to exercise with a group of people, such as joining a sports team. Which do you prefer?
Though some people prefer exercising with a group of people, such as playing basketball or tennis, personally, I would like to exercise alone because of the reasons I will explain below.
To begin with, I am an introvert, and exercising alone helps me truly relax. When I work out alone, say running, the only thing I need to care about is my own pace. I don't need to care about what I look like, whether I run faster than others or not because there is only me. This way, I feel really comfortable and relaxed. By contrast, if I join a sports team, then I will start thinking that do I perform well, do they think I am cool, do I need to chat with them during our breaks. It is really exhausting to care so much about other things. Therefore, because of my character, instead of exercising with a team, it is better for me to work out by myself.
Furthermore, exercising alone enables me to concentrate on my own thoughts and figure out something difficult. In this busy society, there are many frustration and trouble required to be deal with. However, people always find out that they cannot concentrate their thought and effort to handle these problems in that there is always something troublesome coming up when they address the existing. But when we exercise, we won't be distracted by any new problem since we can't surf the Internet or talk with others and know some new troubles, then we can concentrate on the existing problem. Moreover, exercising alone enable people just focusing on themselves, rather than their teammates, thus people can devote all their thought and address their own problems successfully. For example, recently I have been anxious about my preparation for the TOEFL, but because of my work, I always feel difficult to focus on my study. Nevertheless, when I went to the gym, listened to English while running on the treadmill, then I found out that I can totally concentrate on my pace and my listening. Since that, I feel my English listening ability progresses.
Lastly, I am a lazy person, and I can exercise alone whenever I want without wasting my time to make appointments with others. For example, If I want to run at midnight, then I can go. By contrast, I need to wait for others’ free time if I want to play tennis, basketball or any kind of team sports. Nowadays, everyone has their own business, and it takes a lot of time to match everyone's schedule. Thus, only if people exercise alone, can we satisfy our willingness to exercise at any time.
Admittedly, some people might argue that joining a sports team is more interesting. However, fun is not the crucial thing I want to get through exercise. With the reasons I mentioned above, personally, I prefer to exercise alone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun frustration seems to be countable; consider using: 'many frustrations'.
Suggestion: many frustrations
...ficult. In this busy society, there are many frustration and trouble required to be deal with. H...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... distracted by any new problem since we cant surf the Internet or talk with others a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i feel, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2261.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71041666667 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72220725265 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50625 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0782659963 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2083333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04166666667 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318991481832 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836126184535 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918734122208 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215713002932 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105568105807 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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