Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Both huge and small cities have their own advantages and disadvantages, but if I want to choose between them, I would rather a small city for living in there. I feel this way for two main reason, which I will explore them in the following essay.
In the first place, big cities have terrible traffic. It makes people, who live in big cities, nervous and anxious because in the spite of the traffic, they have to arrive their workplaces on time. Also, the most of the times of people in a day are spent in the traffic instead of doing which their like to do. My own experience of living in a big city is a compelling example of this. I was in New York last summer for internship and you know traffic in this city is unbelievably horrible. I am a cold blooded person, generally, but I would become so disturbed when I trapped in the heavy traffic and also, I get in trouble for being on time at work. This feature of a big city convinced me that such cities is not made for me.
Secondly, air in big cities is often very toxic and pollution rate is within dangerous range. It is caused the seriously negative effect on people health so that the statistics shows fatality due to air pollution has increased and nowadays it is one of the major factors of so many diseases. Back to example that I indicated in previous paragraph about living in New York, I was there only 3 months, but I barely could breathe, so that my doctor said “you had to use asthma spray until i was there”.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that small city for living is better than huge one for me. This is because, I can’t tolerate intense traffic and toxic air.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...'you had to use asthma spray until i was there'. In conclusion, I st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, you know, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43137254902 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48294623383 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565359477124 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4700622939 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8571428571 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153214925731 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564906080858 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400060879192 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965674014357 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207906548655 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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