some people say that the internet provides a lot of valuable information, others think access to much information creates problems
Nowadays, the internet plays a substantial role in our lives. Therefore, there is a widely held view among people that the internet has a disruptive effect on people’s lives. However, I personally subscribe to the view that the internet can be very worth for people mainly because this sevice is known as one of the cheapest and effective technologies in the world, and the internet has streamlined people’s lives. In-depth discussion on each of the abovementioned reason is presented below.
First and possibly the most important reason why I believe the internet has very useful effects on people’s lives is that this technology is one of the cheapest services in the world. In fact, People can easily access to the internet, and people can obtain very useful information or people can communicate with other people in the everwhere with the lowest cost. To be more specific, this service is known as the best place for sharing people’s interests. In fact, this service gives an incredible chance for people to find people who are very similar to themselves in diverse aspects such as artistic, etc. Accordingly, this service can dramatically improve relationships between people. The noteworthy statistic, revealed by a recent social research in our country, show that the internet increases the hope to live among people to 76 years in the third-world countries. My own experience is also a compelling example of this. My grandmother has very intense dependence on my uncle. After receiving the admission letter from the university in the abroad, my grandmother feels frustration. But, the social application such as Skype or Whatsapp could improve my grandmother’s state. For this reason, I strongly believe that the internet has many advantages for people.
There is a further subtle word we must consider, which is the fact that the internet has simplified people’s lives. In fact, with arrival the most popular websites such as Alibaba or very useful application such as Snapp, the famous online taxi application in Iran, people can save their money and time for other worthwhile issues. For instance, Snapp application can help people to find taxi in everywhere without wasting money and time. Subsequently, the internet provides a very appropriate place for people can easily live.
In a word, by taking all of the aforementioned reasons into account we may draw the conclusion that the internet has very valuable effects in our lives. This is primarily due to the facts that this service is one of the most effective systems in the world and the internet has simplified people’s lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent social research'.
Suggestion: recent social research
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Suggestion: all the
... can easily live. In a word, by taking all of the aforementioned reasons into account we ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...net has simplified people's lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, third, while, for instance, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20470588235 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99423575406 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482352941176 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8101893556 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2380952381 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16721987551 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556902075313 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509726220857 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114150113256 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158157723463 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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