Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The internet is definitely one of the great invention of 21st century, thanks to the internet, I can avoid wasting much more time and can spend time with something more important. Personally, I believe that it is more beneficial than troublesome to have access to the internet. I feel this way for two reason, which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the internet effectively shortens the time of looking up information in comparison to using offline materials. In addition, it reduces the possibility of being misled by the non-updated off-line information which is likely to result in a waste of time making the wrong decision thus ruining the whole plan.
My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in elementary school, i was asked to run an errand for my grandmother to buy some herbal spices as key ingredients for a mouthwatering dish for dinner. I was confident about the location of the grocery store, and I also asked my grandmother to reassure it. As I attended the front of the store, a piece of paper was on the door saying it had already moved to another location. I couldn't be more regretted. If I had checked the address online, I would have search another place to shop, and wouldn't have to be disappointed with such a waste of time.
Secondly, when conducting a academic research, it can be quite exhausting collecting relative materials. What's more, if all the materials are in the form of paper, it can extremely time-consuming. For instance, I conducted a economic research last semester, while we collecting the references materials, we started from the academic paper database. By typing in the key words, in a few seconds we got many relative papers to refer to. Also, the biggest advantage of e-books is that you can easily find the exact part you want to take a look at in those papers and literature without reading all of them. Besides, the information online can be shared effectively, it's such a wonderful trait for group work.
In conclusion, i am of the option that the internet is extraordinary for every benefit it brings to people. For one reason, it reduces the possibility of making non-necessary mistakes ,which means it helps us avoid wasting time. For another reason, it provides us with more convenience academically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85279187817 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94231519154 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558375634518 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6255930889 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12729303894 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379393971196 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356653604011 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774218265227 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345081464205 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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