Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Having Internet access become necessary as basic need of human in the concurrent time. It is diffcult to operate any office and institution and agency in the absent of the internet. Despite its huge importance, it is hard to say that it does not have any disadvantages. However, generally speaking, I think internet has overcome its negative aspect with its utility for all the people regardless of their age and work profile. In the following paragraphs, I will point out why I feel this way with my clear arguments and supporting ideas.
First of all, internet can be good resource for the study materials. Many student nowadays browse an internet to search all kind of the information which is relevant to their study. Of course, there are major issue in the internet using as it is vulnerable to risk its user of leaking thier confidential information. Again, children are tend to utilize this service for their personal entertainment if guardians do not check their activity. They can even use it to look more prohibited content for their age group like pornography. However, many institution are now use online source for their teaching and studnet can easily do the assignement in short time confortable. In fact, it saves their time of relentlessly searching a content over a number of the book by providing it in simple click of the mouse.
In addition to academic source, it is the best platform to know about latest events. Many social application like facebook, twitter, whats app, etc. are excellent means for the sharing the opinion of the people among themselves. Besides, many online news portal are actively working to provide a quick news in the current event relentlessly. Had online system not developed at that extent, we would have to be oblivion with crucial news and facts about the society and world.
In conclusion, I believe, despite internet has some negative outcome in our life, is very crucial to get connected with our society and the whole world situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun institution seems to be countable; consider using: 'many institutions'.
Suggestion: many institutions
...ir age group like pornography. However, many institution are now use online source for their tea...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'used'.
Suggestion: used
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
...source, it is the best platform to know about latest events. Many social application like fa...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much online news', 'a good deal of online news'.
Suggestion: much online news; a good deal of online news
...f the people among themselves. Besides, many online news portal are actively working to provide ...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'quick news'.
Suggestion: quick news
... portal are actively working to provide a quick news in the current event relentlessly. Had...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, look, so, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in short, kind of, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9671641791 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73584328756 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605970149254 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8523807777 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.4444444444 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166120762957 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444129674974 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317417100753 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907999291 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320526213612 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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