Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to too much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this age of technological advancement, it will be only a fool who won’t be accustomed to the vast treasures of using internet. Mobile devices with their internet connections provide the users with access to unlimited amount of knowledge at tips of their fingers. I totally agree with the view that internet provides people with a lot of valuable information and will explain it with three main points.
Firstly, internet does provide us with knowledge not only about things in surroundings but the problems within our bodies. The first instinct of people nowadays when they face any health issues is, get online and try to cure themselves without any external help. This helps people save time and money both. People get on WebMD and type in their symptoms and they get solutions for it. Of course, you won’t be cured totally through this but, you will have had a temporary relief from the problem to go and visit the doctor later.
Secondly, tutorials for literally anything are available online and, are comparatively cheap than applying for a class. Many platforms for learning like Udemy and Edureka provide useful and unlimited courses at less price. Such platforms make learning fun, interactive and easily doable at home. We get information regarding almost anything right from making a simple recipe to building an actual house online. This benefits us, by making us more equipped with knowledge to sustain ourselves in the outside world, in terms of ease in getting jobs.
Lastly, the only ill-effect of having too much information on the internet is it falling into the wrong hands. Presence of the Dark Web is a main cause of all the wrongdoings that are happening in the world where many illegal things are carried out and are often hidden from the law. Many, cases of scamming and data leaks have been caused in recent times, a prominent example being Apple cloud leak. But, in the face of such danger we can turn to technological knowledge present on the web and help protect ourselves from such potential internet hazards. Many software solutions have been created just to keep data safe and secure.
In conclusion, too much of anything and that too unrestrained will of course be bad for us. But, we choose what we do with that and, the merits of having internet access outweigh the cons by a huge degree.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to like'
Suggestion: to like
...or a class. Many platforms for learning like Udemy and Edureka provide useful and un...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fun'
Suggestion: to fun
...ess price. Such platforms make learning fun, interactive and easily doable at home....
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88161209068 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51184404493 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576826196474 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5857401414 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.85 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25845073807 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712846433842 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863177049606 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141405311625 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903895723761 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to like'
Suggestion: to like
...or a class. Many platforms for learning like Udemy and Edureka provide useful and un...
^^^^
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fun'
Suggestion: to fun
...ess price. Such platforms make learning fun, interactive and easily doable at home....
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88161209068 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51184404493 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576826196474 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5857401414 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.85 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25845073807 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712846433842 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863177049606 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141405311625 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903895723761 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.