Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable
information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which
view do you agree with?
The pros and cons of internet is a long-debated topic. Some people think that too much access to the data of internet creates some problems in a person's life. However, I totally disagree to the above statement. In fact, In my opinion internet is the most valuable source of information for the following three reasons.
First of all, Internet resources are valuable because it is a plethora of unanswered and mysterious question. For example, once I had a doubt why air hostess ask us to open the windshield at the time of plane takeoff and landing. Many people couldn't answer this question. As soon as I searched this question on internet, I got the answer. If there had not been internet, It would be difficult to get such mysterious questions answered. Thus, Internet is the only reliable source to find all the answers.
Secondly, It helps to develop knowledge of a student because internet is easily accessible and user friendly. Internet has information in various forms like audio, video, animation etc. For instance, When I was a kid, book was the only source of knowledge. Many students are not interested in reading books. But, students enjoy when the same book material is presented in the form of story in video or animation. Thus, a student can easily gain knowledge of uninteresting or tedious subjects.
Lastly, Information from internet has made human life easier and also independent because it has simple steps described of each and each simple task. The dependency of another person has been removed and Internet has become the only dependent source. For example, if a person is travelling by flight for the first time and doesn't know to board a flight. There are sites like wiki how with detailed description and images. So, the person travelling first time by flight would not require asking for guidance to any other person. Thus, Internet has somewhere made humans independent and made life simpler.
In conclusion, Internet is life saver. It has revolutionized the lives of people. Thus, it is the source of precious information and be valued like a treasure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Many
... the time of plane take off and landing.Many people couldnt answer this question. As...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... plane take off and landing.Many people couldnt answer this question. As soon as I sear...
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Line 2, column 273, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ny people couldnt answer this question. As soon as I searched this question on int...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...s question on internet I got the answer.If there had not been internet, It would b...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , students
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...lling by flight for the first time and doesnt know to board a flight. There are sites...
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Line 4, column 488, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'asking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: asking
... first time by flight would not require to ask for guidance to any other person. Thus,...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92329545455 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73134539278 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551136363636 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3204073281 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.347826087 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3043478261 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30434782609 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197523162191 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499190661967 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672097546175 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111681170729 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844884693281 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.