Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
During the centuries a lot of advances were made in technology of information such as Morse code, radio, newspapers and television. Nowadays with the advent of the Internet we have the quickest access to an ineffable quantity and variety of information that we had not had imagined it before. I agree with the statement that the internet provides us with precious information. I feel this way for the following reasons.
Firstly, staying well informed is always an advantage. Having access to a wide range of important information about economy or politics is crucial for all people. With the fastness of circulation of information is possible to achieve thousands of people in few seconds. For example, during the election process is easier to follow our candidate agenda and speech online rather than by newspaper in the next day only. I always read online news because it is the faster way to be well informed about what is happening, political and economic aspects, in the entire world.
Secondly, the Internet approximate people that live far away. Distance is always a concern of families, friends and lovers that have someone living in another country. Getting information from a distant relative in the past was a difficult task and could take months. At this time, with the Internet is necessary only one touch in an electronical device to receive and send messages to someone. For instance, I have nephews that live abroad and I follow their growth and development only by the Internet. It is a pivotal factor to shorten distances and ameliorate the sadness of not being there with them.
Finally, precious information, provided by the Internet, can help people and even save lives. Although it is argued that the access to a variety of information can cause problems, it can not be compared with the benefit to save fives. Police, medical services, planes, metereologic services all use the Information provided by the Internet to help people. For example, during a hurricane we can all get previous information in order to protect ourselves and family getting away from the risky places avoiding the danger.
To sum up, I strongly agree that the Internet gives us fundamental information that helps us to stay well informed, to reduce distances and help other people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06878306878 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7573042428 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542328042328 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4754985461 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261041548421 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079791273846 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746532875237 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141926273186 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509241147547 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.