Some people say that a person should make important decisions alone. Others believe that it is always better to ask others for help.
No matter what age, everyone are unable to avoid making decisions in lifetime. When we are going to make the final decision, there are two options for us. Either make the important decision on our own or turn to others for help. Personally speaking, it is always better to ask others for help since we can receive experienced and helpful suggestions and also make us higher efficiency.
For students, sometimes they are so immature and young that they could not take all factors into consideration when that face making a significant decision. At this time, it is better to take maxanium advantage of their parents or friends who are more experienced and knowledgeable. Take me as an example. When I had to choose my major, I felt extremely anxious. Because I have no idea about any major. Ultimately, I asked my brother who had already graduated from university to give me some information and advice. Therefore, he was positive and patient to tell me what he knew. Thanks to his help, I eventually decided to choose my interested major. Without my brother’s assistance, I guess I would regret my decision.
With the aid of others, we can improve our efficiency and save our time while making final decisions. Almost everyone thinks highly of the final option and spends time and energy considering the expected results. It means it is inevitable for us to dedicate ourselves to finding related information for the important decision. Before I submitted my major fill, I lack of information about various majors and fields. If I did not receive my brother’s help, I would have waste the huge amount of time to varied searching websites. What’ s more, I could not guaranteed what I found was useful. Because of the same experience, I got important and helpful information from my brother. These information exceedingly supported me to make such a significant decision when I chose my major.
Admittedly, relying on others too much may not develop our problem-solving and critical abilities. However, only when we have to make the important decisions can we turn to others for help. Guidance from people who are successful and knowledgeable enable us to avoid mistakes. Additionally, listen to others’ advice help us achieve a better consequence.
Therefore, it is extremely wiser to ask other people for help than make the important decisions alone.
In a word, in order to reach an expected and fantastic outcome, it is better to get assistance from others. Allowing others to involve our decisions-making helps us boost our productivity and save time as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ose my major, I felt extremely anxious. Because I have no idea about any major. Ultimat...
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Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'guarantee'
Suggestion: guarantee
...ebsites. What' s more, I could not guaranteed what I found was useful. Because of the...
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Line 3, column 691, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'These informations'?
Suggestion: This information; These informations
...nd helpful information from my brother. These information exceedingly supported me to make such a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03496503497 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0193544367 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5337995338 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2958823811 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1428571429 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3214285714 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.10714285714 5.45110844103 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340584049992 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919790274317 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120771105886 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242800986051 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153319263692 0.0645574589148 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.