Some people show their emotions, while other people work hard to keep their emotions from showing. what are the advantages of each type of behavior? which behavior do you prefer?
People are different, and the variety in personality is obvious. Some people are extroverted, and others are introverted. Extraverted persons almost show their emotions while introverted persons do not show their emotions. Showing emotions and control it, has advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, showing emotions help people to receive empathy. Talking with others and showing emotions is a trigger to be calm. In this way, people can share their emotions; they can also receive others' advice. However, there are distinct disadvantages. Showing emotions provide misusing opportunities. There are some people around us that willing to hurt us. They try to find our weaknesses, and they would make us feel bad. So controlling emotions prevent our self-esteem from their hit. For example, when I showed my emotions about fear of insects, someone was trying to annoy me, and this state of affairs was fun for others.
The second point I would like to say is that mastering emotions lead to more success. Sometimes showing emotions declare our goals, and we have an idea about something new that we want to experience, but talking with others will dissuade us. Controlling emotions provides you with opportunities to select the best methods also Emotions galvanize people to make an undesirable decision.
For instance, I decided to change my university for a bachelor's degree. Everything was provided, but when I showed my emotions about it, one of my classmates tried to dissuade me and said terrible things about that university. Unfortunately, she could persuade me.
As a result of these experiences, I prefer to control my emotions because it will make me successful. However, showing and controlling emotions depend on the situation. Sometimes showing emotions has pros, and sometimes hiding emotion has pros.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32871972318 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90755050342 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56401384083 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.805510393 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1363636364 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375938703763 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119269522618 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809802958972 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223787852646 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115842663826 0.0645574589148 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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