Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view?

Land is important because it provides us place to live and it also used

to satify human needs. Some people think that land should be used for

farmland, housing and industry while others think that it is more

important to save land for endangerd animals. According to me it is

more important to save land for endangered species for the following

reasons.

Endangered species are on the verge of extiction. They need to be

protected from being extinct. To protect them it is important to

provide them natural habitant. For example, due to human intervention

in forest land their is imablance in natural ecosystem. There is no

food and shleter availble for animals. Animals are become vulnerable.

Due to scarcity of food, animal left their place and entered in human

terriotory. Many times we have seen it news like tiger has entered in

human colony. So, it's our responsibility to prevent such diasater from

happening and provide animals with proper shelter. If there isn't land

saved for the endanegred animals, endangered species will die.

Human needs are never ending. Now huaman need land for farming, housing

and industry. In future human needs will increase, human will need land

to increase their business expansion. To satisfy their needs human will

expoit the wildlife. So, in such cases it is important to save

endangered species from extinction and save land for them. For example,

I read the news in newspaper stating that to construct industry near to

village, management has decided to built factory near the forest. There

were many people protesting this new construction because they think

that this new construction will be harful to wildlife because industry

will releases toxic chemicals in the environment. If human wants to

satisfy their needs then it is also important to take care of the other

anumals also. Because, if the species died then human will not be able

to recreate it. So, human should provide fixed land to endanegred

species so their needs didn't cause the extinction of endangered

species.

In sum, it is important to save land for endangered species because we

need to save endangered species from extinction and with provison for

endangered species, humans will be able to satisfy their needs.

Votes
Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35849056604 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57030382201 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452830188679 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3922055248 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8333333333 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4583333333 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 5.45110844103 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 32.0 4.53405017921 706% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 59.0 5.5376344086 1065% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410395774773 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125820500062 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111004034078 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118638913567 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966199805012 0.0645574589148 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.