Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view?
land is a limited resource on earth. People have been in arguments that land should be given to satisfy human needs for housing, farmland and industry instead of keeping it for endangered species. I personally disagree with the idea that land should be kept to humans rather than endangered species. endangered species are habitants of earth, which they deserve to use the land they live in. I feel this for a few reasons, which I will be explaining in the following essay.
First of all, endangered species, although with their small number, are still an important member of the ecosystem. taking land away from them will lead them into extinction which will affect the whole chain of the ecosystem and will then affect other species and human. For example, deforestation for the construction of farms or power plants will cause certain species, such as bears, to move away from the land. they may face threats in survival and therefore will go on extinction. animals bear preys on, such as bunnies, will overpopulate and will cause potential harm to crop harvest for us human to feed on.
Secondly, endangered species are precious resources for scientific research. it is important to ensure their survival so that we get enough information about them and that will enable us to have a better understanding of our earth. By studying these members, say sea turtles we will have a better understanding of the conditions in the ocean and the ecosystem of marine animals. this will provide us with a better vision of the earth as a whole.
Finally, in my opinion, humans do not require that much land. our technology has been advancing for the past decade. I do have confidence that it will enable us to survive and will fulfil our needs without having to take land away from the animals. Modern technology will allow agriculture and farming to be done efficiently which therefore less land will be required to satisfy the demand, it will also allow us to build taller skyscrapers for us to live in and will reduce the housing needs. therefore, there is no need for owning that much land and leave none to the animals.
In conclusion, I am to the opinion of land should be kept for endangered species rather than for human needs as humans do not require that much land and because endangered species are important to sustain a balance in the ecosystem. Further more, they can provide valuable information about earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92289156627 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60089871355 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484337349398 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2211395379 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2857142857 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7619047619 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09523809524 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284040085419 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964799611586 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786746617549 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184543618201 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866378258359 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.