Some people think that success is most important in their life. Others
think that it’s more important to be happy when they fail. Which idea do
you agree with and why?
First of all, I am of the opinion that failure is leads to large success in the future. Personally speaking, if people fail to achieve something in their life, they will learn from that failure in the way that how to become successful in the future. In other words, after any failure, people definitely assess the reasons of their failure and try not to do them again. Moreover, on the condition that people experience a failure, they will strive more that before to forget their failure. My own experience is compelling example of this, When I was in highshool, I could not pass some of my courses and had to finish highschool one year after all my friend did. It was a kind of failure for me since all frind of mine went to university and I could not. Because ot this, after graduation I tried a lot, even more than before, and finally accepted in the best university in my country. Having considered this experience, I strongly believe that people should be happy when they face a problem and fail, since they will be more eager to try hard and become successful.
Second, no matter whether you succeed or fail, during you are try to attain youe aims, you accomlish a lot of objects which are really valuable, So, you should not be sad when fail, since your achievements are a kind od success. In addition, the accomplishments you earn during striving to achieve your goals, will help you to be more successful in the future, since you will be more skilful and professional and all of them, finally, make you a successful person. For exapmle, I remember a time my sister was working in a lab to make an important medical device, it was really crucial for her to can make that device and be succeful, because of some happenings, she could not make that device and failed. But, during the time she was struggling to make that device, she earned a lot of experiences which could use them some years after and made a medical device much more advenced than it was supposed to be. In fact, her experiences taught her to be more successful later.
Finally, I strongle believe that people should not be disappointed when they fail. Not only will they become more successful in the future, but they also abtain a lot of accomplishment which are obtained during try.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of the opinion that failure is leads to large success in the future. Personally ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, after all, in addition, in fact, kind of, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59259259259 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55842982635 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476543209877 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4715857755 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254957298939 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094138629876 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596426244223 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190821780369 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290072865427 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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