Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
Nowadays, we can rely on somebody, such as teachers and friends. Thus many people always look for teachers when it comes to starting new things. However, I personally do not think learning from teacher is always good because if people depends others, they will never stand by themselves without teacher. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the most important thing to start something is knowing about it. In this age, we can find a large amount of information from the internet, and it allow us to study by ourselves. Some people say that I do not know how to start or study, but we cannot excuse anymore because we have access to the internet. In other words, Internet is our teacher instead of humans, so we do not need to be taught in person and pay a fee. For example, when I started studying the TOEFL, I thought I need a teacher to know how to study and spent money for teachers. However, one day, I realized that internet is useful and there are many resources, which I can use. Therefore, I shifted my mind to a positive way. My recognition has greatly changed my thought and I assert that it will help me in the future.
Second, teacher is not always correct. Many people think that teacher is literally teacher, so they know all of information correctly and they teach us correctly whenever. However, I think it is outdated thought, and sometimes, teachers make mistakes. To give my example, when I was a high school student, I drew a picture in art class, I thought my art was great, but my teacher said “ You should revise at this point”. Then, I confused because I thought art is looted in one’s creativity, there is no room to be revised by others. After this experience, I have been think that teacher is not always correct, and I always make a decision by myself.
On a final note, the internet has enabled us to study by ourselves, so we do not need to rely on others. In addition, teacher is not always perfect, hence we should have own identity. These are two reasons why I absolutely think that learning without teachers is more effective than learning from teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, second, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, i feel, i think, in addition, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55526992288 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53561672417 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508997429306 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6549333364 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.380952381 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5238095238 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326894845132 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098603745608 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788969693027 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212013766792 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575307613615 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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