Some peoples forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why?
While some parents nowadays purchase smart phones for their young children, I strongly contend that those young children are not ready to acquire their own smart phones due to the fact that the phones are likely to cause several issues to its young owner. In this essay, I will discuss reasons and examples to support my viewpoint.
To begin with, young kids are not able to take a good care of their belonging. For example, they may accidentally break their expensive smart phones by unintentionally dropping or damping the phones. Although the phone has so many interesting functions, they will s...
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