Some students prefer to live on campus in a dormitory and some others prefer an apartment or a house at off campus
There has been no shortage of opinion on whether students should live in campus or off campus. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely select to live off campus due to some of the benefits it offers to me. It is my firm belief that living off campus can help me to socialize more easily that can help me in future for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with living off campus in an apartment provides an opportunity to have some time off from friends and explore the nearby places and make new friends. It can also help to know perspective of different people and learn new things from them. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been strongly influenced by my own personal experience. When I was in Canada for my research internship, I could not be able to get in campus accommodation and I have to get the off-campus accommodation nearby my university. Now, this gave me a chance to interact with new people living in that apartment and also after coming back from work, I feel great to interact with persons on different things not related to work. As my roommate was French so, I also got a chance to learn some French. As a result, living off campus helps me to interact with more people apart from my friends and learn some new things. For this reason, preferring off campus accommodation can give one chance to meet new people and know about them.
Secondly, living off campus can also grab a chance to live with your own family and spend time with them after coming back from university. This can help you in your bad time and also give chance to take care of your parents and spend some time with them. Drawing from my own experience, when I was completing my undergraduate study, I live with my parents and it really helped me as one time I got less grade in one subject, and I was depressed with that in that time my parents motivated me and gave me strength to do better next time. Moreover, my mom fell sick for a week and as I was with them, I take care of her and also managed to handle the house by cooking food and doing work. It's certainly clear to see why living off campus can provide one with an opportunity to increase their family bonding and supporting each other in their bad time.
Now, one can take issue with this claim by contending that living on campus can help one to enjoy their campus life and make stronger bond with their friends. Now this can be true up to certain extent but, we normally spend lot of time on campus and with friends while we are on university and refreshes one's mind by taking some time off from friends and study and keep one energized to stay on track.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that living off campus can keep one feel refreshed at the same time also gave time to one to explore new things and make new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, i feel, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 97.0 52.1666666667 186% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2353.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 537.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38175046555 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81386128306 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34853289097 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409683426443 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.0 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1538848105 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.842105263 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2631578947 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278688954896 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113243869586 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862687778534 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17285028745 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683374550802 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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