Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible.
Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which
of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use
memorized examples.
Parents are the god who brought us to the world, teaches many things starting from walking to taking our own responsibility. However, after a specific time, it is necessary to get independent from parents. So I think the first situation is better, a young adult should get independent as soon as possible from parents. In support, providing following three reasons.
Firstly, young adults should be responsible and they should take responsibility on their own. Parents are not there for us over our lifetime. For example, the national family survey 2020 states that young people who are independent of their parents are more responsible than those who stay with their families. Many times this independence turns into responsible behavior of individuals. One of my friends who lives with his family he was not responsible at that time once his parents made him independent he becomes more responsible.
Secondly, freedom from parents is necessary to gain some privacy in life. In some way, parents are more cautious about their children and while taking care of them young adults lost all their privacy. For example, the youth survey 2019 claims that young adult who stays with their parents are more concerned about their privacy than those who are independent of family.
Finally, independent young adults are able to focus on their own careers and gate more time to improve themselves. For instance, people who got independent early are doing good in life than those who are still living with their parents.
In conclusion, It is good to live with parents but after considering the above three reasons. I come to the conclusion that it is better to have early freedom from parents to grow more, to get more responsible in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02430555556 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65426578032 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513888888889 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9956052005 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4375 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37555035909 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13144401638 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077145003329 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220423136037 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629022400255 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.