Independence is the basic requirement of a human being. Some young adults prefer independence from their parents for reasons like taking self-decisions. While some young adults prefer to live with thier families in order to spend more time with their parents. In my opinion, getting independent from our parents as soon as possible is beneficial in longer run for life for various reasons.
Firstly, staying alone or away from our parents makes us understand value of money. For example, as we grow up our parents fulfill each of our needs let it be basic needs or luxurious needs as well. If we ask them to buy us a luxurious bike they will even if not in their budget manage somehow and buy us a bike which will be of least necessity at that point of time. Staying away from parents will make us understand hardships of life and also teach us to earn our own bread and butter.
Furthermore, at some point of time it is better or even suitable to be able to take our own decisions in life. Being overly dependent on parents will only make us dependent for life. Our parents will always have our back but not forever, so it is important to develop the skill to take up decisions effectively. For instance, what if a situation comes up which you have never faced alone because you always had your parents for you, in such times we would end up taking the wrong turn which might prove harmful.
Finally, when we live away from our parents we become more responsible individual. As we need to earn money to satisfy our needs we remove the burden from our family to provide funds for us. So our parents are relieved to some extent. However, it might be true for some individuals to stay with their parents for longer period of time to support them financially or to just take care of their parents.
In conclusion, independence not only makes us responisble but also let us take our own decisions wisely. It helps us to be recognized as a strong independent person who can stand on his on feet without needing anyone to support him. Also, independence makes us more educated about actual difficulties of life and teaches us how to overcome it in the most practical and effective manner. So, my opinion surely aligns best with young adults who seek independence from their parents as soon as possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...for reasons like taking self-decisions. While some young adults prefer to live with t...
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Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs let" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'let' or 'to be let'.
Suggestion: let; to be let
...p our parents fulfill each of our needs let it be basic needs or luxurious needs as...
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Line 2, column 326, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the least'.
Suggestion: of the least
...somehow and buy us a bike which will be of least necessity at that point of time. Stayin...
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Line 4, column 320, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s to stay with their parents for longer period of time to support them financially or to just ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61219512195 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54758520228 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3420339564 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.55 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32283286381 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115545256715 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119526605752 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212995054012 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142763863818 0.0645574589148 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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