Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
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This essay explores the preference of young adults who want to live alone from their parents and those who prefer to live with their families for a longer period.
Personally, I believe that the situation that young adults who want to live independently from their parents is better. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, young adults who prefer living independently from their parents are more capable of taking care of themselves. Those young adults who prefer living with their families for a longer period of time can cause them to be lazy and leech off their families, instead of being independent and self-sufficient.
My personal experience is a compelling example of this. While this may not be the exact situation, there were numerous times where my parents went overseas for long periods of time. I had to take care of my laundry, keep the house's cleanliness and buy or cook my own food.
Also budgetize expenses to make sure I don't overspend on food or toiletries, etc.
Secondly, independent young adults are able to enjoy privacy and the freedom of doing what they want with their lives without the distraction of their parents. For instance, I was able to bring some friends over to my house for a sleepover.
My friends were able to stay at my house for several days without any disturbance from my parents. We played video games until really late, went out for some drinks, one of my friends even brought a group of girls to have fun with in my house.
We were also able to talk as loudly as we want to without my parents scolding me about my noise.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that young adults who prefer living independently from their parents as soon as possible as it helps them to mature and be self-sufficient.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...living with their families for a longer period of time can cause them to be lazy and leech off...
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Line 9, column 226, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'houses'' or 'house's'?
Suggestion: houses'; house's
...ad to take care of my laundry, keep the houses cleanliness and buy or cook my own food...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...anliness and buy or cook my own food. Also budgetize expenses to make sure I dont ...
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Line 11, column 40, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... Also budgetize expenses to make sure I dont overspend on food or toiletries, etc. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, really, second, secondly, so, while, as for, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63754764638 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525316455696 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9828452299 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.066666667 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394115947704 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153383443656 0.076458572812 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14511376843 0.0737576698707 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196056302529 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148060185454 0.0645574589148 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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