Students in a university club want to help others, but they can only choose one project a year, which one of the following is the best? 1. help those students in a nearby primary school with reading and mathematics; 2. help people who cannot afford to build or rent a home to build a house; 3. visit and assist elderly people with daily tasks.
Extracurricular activities play an essential role in our university life, as students can make friends with schoolmates from various departments and improve their communication ability. A university club is now in confusion, for they have to choose only one project to implement in this whole year. From my perspective, I stand for assisting pupils with reading and mathematics.
First of all, university students are familiar with these knowledges. As we all know, to be adopted by a famous university is not easy. Every member of university has experienced lots of exams, so to teach some pupils is certainly a piece of cake. They all know what pupils should study, so what they need to be patient to pupils merely, for little kids will have some weird questions. To explain complex theory in detail and briefly is really significant. Nevertheless, what about choosing to help people build or rent a house? Obviously, not all students have basic knowledge on civil engineering and commerce. It seems hard for them.
Besides, university students need more innovational ideas. Undergraduates are assigned a variety of theses, which makes them really confused. They need plenty of novel ideas to invent new methods and create new approaches. Thus, how to find new ideas? The best way is to communicate with pupils. Though they may have countless absurd opinions, pupils are creative. Maybe a mistake they made will get you an inspiration immediately. So, instead of being perplexed in your lab, let's participate in such a meaning for event and discover new idea in elementary school. If you decide to visit and assist elderly people, you will not have such a chance to refresh your mind.
Admittedly, to build a house or to assist elderly people are also have several benefits. You can learn how to communicate with others properly. However, there are more professional volunteers in the society and people can receive assistance from them as well. These volunteers have learned how to take care of elderly people, especially during emergency. They also run a fund to help these homeless people. As a university student, the advantage of us is academic knowledge. Therefore, to teach pupils is the most proper selection.
These are reasons that I choose the first option.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, briefly, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12600536193 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86269586862 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592493297587 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2714814208 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2857142857 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3214285714 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17857142857 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224580903097 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054172243484 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544514779531 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115642087197 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622235021893 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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