Students in a university club want to help others, but they can only choose one project a year, which one of the following is the best? 1. Help those students in a nearby primary school with reading and mathematics; 2. Help people who cannot afford to build or rent a home to build a house; 3. Visit and assist elderly people with daily tasks.
Students in a university club want to help others, but they can only choose one project a year, which one of the following is the best? 1. Help those students in a nearby primary school with reading and mathematics; 2. Help people who cannot afford to build or rent a home to build a house; 3. Visit and assist elderly people with daily tasks.
From many erudite thinkers' point of view, although human is on the edge of the civilization now, no one can turn a blind eye to the significance of university students in thriving and blooming societies. Furthermore, the debate surrounding how students in the university clubs can help others has witnessed many controversies in recent years. Whereas some are inclined toward the opinion that they can help that student in a nearby primary school, with reading and mathematics, on the other extreme of the rope, some believe that they can help people who cannot afford to build or rent a home or visit and assist eldery people with daily tasks. Although both sides take their own positions, from my vantage point, the first group carries more weight. In the following paragraph , I will delve into some conspicous aspects which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
The first exquisite reason of the current discussion which demands a keen contemplation is that since they are enaging in their studies, they are the best teachers for the primary schools. Furthermore, in this way, some of their primary lessons especially in mathematics also reviewed and both of the university and primary students can benefit from this program. Moreover, not only the university students can interpret the mathematics and read for primary schools in a convenient way to understand and digest the materials, but also the primary school students should not pay a high amount of money to hire private teachers. What's more, when they teach, they accumulate some pricious experience in a real world that may result in some positive ramifications for their future career. Hence, helping the primary school students brings about loads of advantages for them.
The second reason coming to my mind cogently substantiate and vindicate my standpoint concerned with this issue is that assiting eldery people need some especials knowledge including how to treat them, how to behave them and etc. which are not found in the university students. In other words, although it is definitely true that university students are a volunteer to help old people, it is a latent danger that can jeopardize the health of old people, no matter physical and mental Another reason which desreve some words is that most of the university students depend financially on their parents or scholarships. So, they do not have sufficient money to bulid or rent a home.
To put everything in a nutshell, a broad look at the main points and discussions reveals the fact that it is by far better for students in university clubs to help nearby students of primary schools with mathematics and reading since they are the best teachers as far as they are involved in the studies and lessons, and also they do not have adequate knowledge to traet eldery people and also they do not have enough money to help to build house for students.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'whereas', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234899328859 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.142617449664 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10067114094 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0469798657718 0.046263068375 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0469798657718 0.0685040099705 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114093959732 0.118717715034 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0201342281879 0.0351676179071 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65432788486 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0302013422819 0.0309702414327 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110738255034 0.0887237588012 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0218120805369 0.0209618222197 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0218120805369 0.0139019557991 157% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3234.0 2387.08602151 135% => OK
No of words: 547.0 408.028673835 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91224862888 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83611736076 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35466179159 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254113345521 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173674588665 0.174417080927 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111517367459 0.112833075102 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65432788486 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464351005484 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.9043499342 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 27.35 20.5533526081 133% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.828910939 48.84282405 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.7 120.699889404 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.35 20.5533526081 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.644075263715 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 52.7613345521 45.7405998639 115% => OK
Elegance: 1.56028368794 1.45489161554 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.63493016959 0.300154397459 212% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0886506026244 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0916472315172 0.0752933317313 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.498512855848 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.21126701332 0.151897553556 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23669656797 0.114077575197 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169339474182 0.0781384742642 217% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.458079948815 0.336927656856 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0608604448751 0.067059652881 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.475683915772 0.210909579961 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180973013585 0.0618886996521 292% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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