Technology made our life better. do you agree or disagree
Nowadays technology has become an undeniable part of society that has dramatically rendered so many changes in social and even personal life. A controversial question which is often raised in this regard is that whether technology has made our life better or not. Some people adamant that technology has lead people to be apart from family and it decrease family values. But I firmly think its benefits carry more weight than its disadvantages. There are so many pivotal reasons supporting my point of view two of which will be explained below.
One important reason is that technology has made communication easier and faster. In the past, it was impossible or at least hard to convey people far from you and probably all the family was not aware of the situation of one who traveled therefor it caused anxiety for them and even if he was in trouble he could not access to his family help. Nowadays you can convey easily to everyone where ever they are. For instance, my aunt has immigrated to Germany 30 years ago and my grandparents explain that time it was hard for them to know about her and talk to her. While nowadays due to the technology they can talk every day and they even can see each other with new applications.
Another prominent factor is that technology has facilitated access to information and data we need. Searching on the internet can help you find your school question, ways for your problem, food recipe and even brief solution for your legal problems. Indeed it markedly has paved the way for finding information as soon as possible. This advantage can help you especially in lack of time and emergency that is impossible to find an appropriate book containing the answer to your problem. By the way of example, last week I had an exam and could not solve a problem and university library did not have related book so I was actually upset but I try to search that on the internet and fortunately I could find it. That time I really admired technology.
In brief, I believe technology has made our life more convenient. As it is mentioned it makes communication and searching much more easily for the human. Also, it can cause some undesirable problems but its positive changes obviously can compensate for that.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...d people to be apart from family and it decrease family values. But I firmly think its b...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...brief solution for your legal problems. Indeed it markedly has paved the way for findi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so, while, apart from, at least, for instance, in brief, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75128205128 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67214058495 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55641025641 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7246493719 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5263157895 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165548249799 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590802633104 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904334855895 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106430296588 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503534593427 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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