There are times when lying is acceptable.
Time is something important for all of us. It creates the situation where we does something good or something bad. In this process lying is done some time for good and some time for bad. There are times when lying is acceptable. Do we agree or disagree with this statement? So, when considering whether lying is sometime acceptable or not. I believe, lying should not be accepted anytime.
The first reason is that, when lying is sometime accepted, we become more motivated towards lying. For example, when I was a school kid, I was very mischevious. I use to play most of the time rather than studying. Mostly, I used to play with ball. One I lost my ball and I needed another one to play but I did not have money. I decided to steal iit from my parents wallet. Another day, they found some amount from their wallet was missing.. so, they came asking about the money to me and I lied mentioning, I don’t know. That was the time I started lying and I remember the next day I started doing it for other this too. This proves that lying for the first time motivates to lie for the next time.
The second reason is that, lying develop bad habit. For example, I remember, when I was employed in an IT company. There was a manager, who always lied to his staff for everything, whether it was necessary or not. I always saw him lying. Initially, I thought it was normal but later on it was really hard to believe him. Whenever we staffs were having problems regarding the projects, our manager used to convince us, showing his vision and aim, which was only a lie. Later, we came to know, to lie was a habit of our manager and we never trusted him from that day anymore. This resulted, bad influence towards worker and company progress started declining but the habit of our manager lying never changed. This clearly explains, habit is developed by our regular activities. So, in this way lying also become a habit after sometime, if we start doing it for time and again.
In sum, though many people believe, there are times when lying is acceptable, there are situation when we need to lie to settle things up but that later had very bad influence on ourselves and on the community. So, lying, in my opinion is not a thing that should be accepted for any reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, regarding, second, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46024096386 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36760445983 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49156626506 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.413205144 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8275862069 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3103448276 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72413793103 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 19.0 3.85842293907 492% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409685485706 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121793077589 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139470597112 0.0737576698707 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313796370151 0.150856017488 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114102508944 0.0645574589148 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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