In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Personally, I agree with this statement and deeply believe that being quick is the most important aspect of the business nowadays. In the following I will briefly explain my reasons behind this belief.
First, with the pace of changes and technology nowadays one have to work as much quick as possible in my opinion. That is my opinion that in order to compete with your opponent companies in today's world. If one cannot reach a predefined goal in the desired time for instance develop a product and provide the customers in time, other companies would win the race and he would lose his part in the market.
Second, risking to make mistakes in the price of working quickly have some benefits which is more important than not. When one decides to work quickly he will reach lots of his goals in time and even if he make a few mistakes within these projects the advantages would be more appreciable than disadvantages. Not to mention that being careful to make least mistakes will make his business more profitable.
Furthermore, with the advancement of the technology nowadays, I think it is impossible to avoid every mistake in your job no matter how hard you try or how much attention you are taking. I think it is more important to find a way to compensate the consequences of your mistakes Instead of wasting lots of time not to make any.
These were a few reasons which shaped my mind to take this side. Finally, I can claim being more quick in the business will overweight the consequences of not making any mistakes by working very slowly which will cause you to lost a big portion of market and business.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...ots of his goals in time and even if he make a few mistakes within these projects th...
^^^^
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'make the least'.
Suggestion: make the least
...s. Not to mention that being careful to make least mistakes will make his business more pr...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 286.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67832167832 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56589283761 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531468531469 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4621129222 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321832724042 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121941578358 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11807140926 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159058667796 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123471510202 0.0645574589148 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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