TOEFL IND writing 185-139 What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
It is critically vital that every house of the family has a most essential room for the people who live there, which varies from person to person. In my opinion, I consider that the dining room is the most critical space for my family. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, it is noticeable that the culture of the country that people lived in emphasizes the union of the family, which means that families are the most vital element that constructs a country. Relatives often travel back to their hometown and gather together during special holidays, and if there is any emergency, relatives will assemble and overcome the hardships together. For instance, the land of our ancestors is the origin of the family, yet anyone who invades the place, people in the family will protect it together.
In addition, there is no doubt that the dining room is the space that connects the people in the families, and people can share their day during dinner when they get back from jobs or school. It is clear that people nowadays have less time to spend with their loved ones, yet devote themselves to their tasks from work and assignments from schools, yet leave less time for their relatives. By the way of illustration, after an exhausting day, it is such a relief while everyone sits behind the dining table and talks about their day.
Last on the contrary not least, there is no denying that the dining room is the strongest memory of the time we spend our lives with our parents, and we will never forget it no matter how long we have left our hometown. People must not forget where they belong, no matter how ugly their origin is because it is the region that contributes to the people we are. To cite an instance, while we miss our families, the memory of having dinner with our family will always be remembered.
In conclusion, I intensively believe that the dining room is the most essential room of the house attributed to its assistance in connecting the family members and the comfort from them while we miss our hometown.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, by the way, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66756756757 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36258422848 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483783783784 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.9588295821 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.846153846 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4615384615 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0988885990155 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435149310053 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522688121264 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724179491842 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588795723157 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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