What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
A house is a very important part of any person's life. A house provides shelter, which provides protection from varying external conditions. A house has many rooms: living room, dining room, study room, bedroom, toilet, etc. and what a person might consider to be most important room might differ across general population. In my view, my bedroom, which is combined with study, is the most important room in my entire house for two important reasons.
First, my bedroom is a place where I sleep and rest. Sleep is very important part of my schedule, as it is when I recover from daily stress and tireness. As sleep is very important part of my life, essentially the bedroom becomes a place which holds utmost importance than any other room in my house. In addition to that, being an ambivert, I need some lone-time after some intense socialization. In this room, I recover from any after-effects of socialization. Taking a recent example, on occassion of my grandmother's birthday, we hosted a big party and there were lots of guests coming to our house. After enjoying the party, I felt that I should be lonely for some time. I went to my bedroom, and spent rest of the time reading a book and listening to some music. This helped me find some comfort after the party. Therefore, I think my bedroom is the most important part of my house.
Second, my bedroom is also where I choose to study. I spend most part of my day studying in this room, ultimately, making it a place where I reside for maximum amount of time. This room has books on bookshelf, white tiles - where I can scribble and draw mindmaps, a table, and sufficient lighting. Due to lack of noise and availability of required things, this room helps me study with maximum concentration. For example, when I was preparing for my GRE examination, I never had any disturbances from guests visiting our place or had to leave the room frequently, because I didn't have required material. I would wake up in the morning, and after brief time invested in getting ready for the day, I would start studying, scribbling, and making notes in this room, contributing towards studying. If I needed some rest, I would take a nap and continue later. Absence of disturbances and availability of resources helped me stay productive. Hence, I think my bedroom, which is also my study room, is the most important part of my house.
In summary, bedroom is most important room in my entire house. This is a room where I sleep and study, spending maximum time of my day here. I think everyone should have such a room, where they can really concentrate on things they are working on.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...A house is a very important part of any persons life. A house provides shelter, which p...
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Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ction from varying external conditions. A house has many rooms: living room, dini...
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Line 5, column 575, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...to leave the room frequently, because I didnt have required material. I would wake up...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, really, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, in summary, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69047619048 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7093584009 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465367965368 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9448737391 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2592592593 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267914144448 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090788675477 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803739699407 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210964454655 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777295448923 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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