To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
After Industrial Revolution, cities have become centre of activity. Vast amount of population migrates to cities for work, business, and for better educational opportunities. Due to this, cities have been centre of diverse societal interactions too. Therefore, to understand the most important characteristics of a society, studying major cities is important. However, population which doesn't live in major cities are also integral part of society and it shall be accounted for when we are perusing society.
Through 19th and 20th centuries, we have seen tremendous growth in major cities. Most of the major investments are done in cities, because it has potential of benefiting a larger amount of population. With ready availability of work, people have often immigrated into cities. Due to different work cultures, people from different jobs have been found to interact with each other. Also, there is presence of social hierarchy depending on place of residence and income earned. This provides a very good opportunity to study society based on these aspects. A diverse set of interactions can be witnessed in Mumbai, which is one of the major cities in India, between people travelling in rail transit system which is divided in expensive first class and cheaper second class.
Often people from surrounding small towns and rural areas gather in cities. These people come from different cultural backgrounds. There are cases of people hailing from different part of countries too. Interaction between people from different background can be studied to understand different aspect of society. Bangalore, one of the major cities in India, has diverse cultural interactions. People from Southern India, Western India, Northern India and North Eastern India have become part of this city. Being a hub for growing Information Technology industry, a lot of young population is also part of this city.
Taking into account how cities can be studied to understand society, rural areas and small towns shall not be neglected. Rural areas have long been centre of agricultural industry, along with emerging small businesses industry. Demographics of these areas can be considered as comparatively less educated. They can also been seen as islands of cultural homogeneity. Since, these are integral part of any society, it deserves attention while understanding important characteristics of society. Many villages in India are still backward and they have different set of beliefs when it comes to important issues of religion, society, national development. These villages can be seen as cultural islands.
It can be concluded that, to understand important characteristics of society, studying diverse interactions in major cities is important. However, interactions in small towns and rural areas shall not be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2396.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 434.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52073732719 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95133858721 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463133640553 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6194455033 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.5714285714 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.17857142857 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.83258426966 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147932833113 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466842062213 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550254841065 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985289353917 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306295635817 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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