TPO 01
Views differ considerably when it comes to the issue of sport and social activities are important and should receive equal financial support, we find that some people hold the idea of agree this statement meanwhile others prefer to disagree. As far as I concerned, it is more advisable to chose agree the statement rather than disagree. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
First of all, it is important to consider that two activities can extent your life style. Certainly, there may be some perspectives that I neglected to fully consider. However, in most cases, sport and social activities can meet a lot of people. To illustrate this idea let us consider in the following example that .
Secondly, the equal importance is that two activities can let you relax in your life. Of course, for some people, there may be an argument to be made for other positions. However, it would be fair to say that for most people it will be. Take a case of pressure , a friend of mine whom I have known him for 20 years, he will go to the tennis court and play tennis when he has high pressure in class.In the same way, he will go to the pub and drink beer to relax. This experience taught him that two activities can let him relax. That is a good example showing that.
Finally, I will be first to admit that two activities are good for health. Despite the possibility, I prefer to maintain my stances for this issue. By way of example, I can remember that . This is the case for many others people as well.
By way of conclusion, based on the argument explored above, the agree and disagree of two activities are carefully compared, the most striking view is obvious. Not only, but also. That is why everyone will do the same thing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to agree'
Suggestion: to agree
...oncerned, it is more advisable to chose agree the statement rather than disagree. My ...
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Line 2, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s consider in the following example that . Secondly, the equal importance is that...
^^
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ople it will be. Take a case of pressure , a friend of mine whom I have known him ...
^^
Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...nnis when he has high pressure in class.In the same way, he will go to the pub and...
^^
Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
.... By way of example, I can remember that . This is the case for many others people...
^^
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
..., based on the argument explored above, the agree and disagree of two activities are care...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...striking view is obvious. Not only, but also. That is why everyone will do the same ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, of course, first of all, in most cases, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55591054313 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52139538866 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520766773163 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.432348879 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.65 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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