TPO-11 - Independent Writing Task
Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The advance of technology has been quicker and quicker today, and so does the advance of the internet. While some people might believe that the internet has brought more problems than advantages, and people should try to get rid of the internet and live a simple life, I believe that the internet has brought a considerable amount of benefit, to be specific, brought so much information that could benefit people's life, that happened in almost all aspect of our life.
First, the social aspect of information. The internet has let people know about the social event that happens in our lives, and we have to do is to search on the internet and tons of information would come up. For example, the marathon dates or the Christmas market dates. By knowing this information, we could easily be involved in the community and the people around us.
Second, the academic information. For students and researchers, the internet is a great place to find information including scientific paper, conference, or public speaking events. This information gives students and researchers a strong support on research paper, academic presentation and even for professional development.
Third, the 'spiritual' information. In recent years, there are more and more so-called civilization diseases, that is, the diseases that occurred because of the modern life, be discovered. As a result, there is more and more self-help information appear on the internet, such as stress management and coping strategies. With this information available online, people could assess this information with just a click and take good care of themselves.
In a nutshell, in my opinion, the internet provides us with lots of information that could benefit our lives, includes but not limited to social information, academic information, and spiritual information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...easily be involved in the community and the people around us. Second, the academic information. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, while, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34137931034 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95154889908 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.8901719883 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.642857143 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21637851529 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694508214869 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545136271498 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122907734977 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354770082392 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.