TPO 11 Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different sides, people must weight pros and cons before jumping to conclusions. After all, each and every question requires careful deliberation in that there are always multiple variables to a truth. Some individuals believe that world wide web provides vital information to humanity, while others disagree. In my humble opinion, I agree that internet provides access to tons of information that is vital in everyday life. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the majority of individuals would agree to the notion that advancement in technology like the internet helps the people to gather needed information that will have numerous advantages. Moreover, websites like CNN, national geographic, BBC news and the like provides humanity with up to date information available with just a click of the button. In other words, every where we can go, we can readily access information we want to know. For example, when I am going to work I always read from the website CNN news, I feel that I am updated with the latest news around the globe. Consequently, when the dengue hemmorhagic virus struck Manila late 1900's I became aware of this phenomenon and make it to a point that me and family will not be affected with this virus. We watched carefully on the Video streaming of CNN how to avoid this fatal virus attacking our blood stream. Luckily, with the help of technology majority of our citizen become aware of this outbreak in dengue virus and only few people are affected due to they become vigilant to combat the said virus. All in all, people can easily acquire information to the internet.
Secondly, the only downside of internet to us is that some of the information spreading in the net is not factual due to many information circulating around the internet portal is not accurate and concise. In addition, some health websites provides false information and we must be on the look out if what we read is from a respectable author or website. Another instance is spreading of fake news on the internet it can quickly manipulate people into believing that certain events or calamities are happening in the globe. A great example of this is when Phivolcs announced that the Philippines would be hit by Signal number 5 storm in Manila, but, in fact the agency miscalculated the typhoon and it is only moonsoon. Majority of the Citizen in the Philippines were on panic and chaos around the city were rampant. Grocery store are being wipe out with food items, candles, water supply. People were in a rush to left their homes because they are too afraid a strong typhoon will hit them. Long story short, we must not believe all the information we see in the internet and must strain if this information should be trusted or not.
In summation, yes, it's virtually impossible to provide an complete satisfying answer to an open ended question. Although the jury may be out on this essay topic, we can come into mutual agreement that access to the internet provides people with vital information with regards to news, politics and current events.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
... a click of the button. In other words, every where we can go, we can readily access inform...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...only downside of internet to us is that some of the information spreading in the net is not...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...eading in the net is not factual due to many information circulating around the inte...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...eading in the net is not factual due to many information circulating around the internet portal ...
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Line 5, column 629, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'storm' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'storms'.
Suggestion: storms
...ippines would be hit by Signal number 5 storm in Manila, but, in fact the agency misc...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...es, its virtually impossible to provide an complete satisfying answer to an open e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, after all, for example, i feel, in addition, in fact, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2625.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 543.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83425414365 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62963693025 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51197053407 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 841.5 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6567207055 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.130434783 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6086956522 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04347826087 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2206442849 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642489739337 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467938328808 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147363346206 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185139407859 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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