TPO-22 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We are human, so in every mintues we are thinking and having a varitey of different ideas on various topics. Some individuals believe that teachers should reveal their points of view of social and political issues to their students, while others firmly disagree with it. In my view, teachers shold not make their social or political views known to their students. pros and cons will be discused below so people can decide which action to take.
First, for student in secondry schools a teacher is a person who is hero. He/She is the one that makes you familiar with the alphabet of everything namely, charecters enviroments social issues or politics. So if a teacher reveals his/her openion on social or political subjects, the students will try to emulate the way that perosn behave or believes, which can be wrong. For example, I had a teacher who was likes dectator based politics, he loved to obligate students to behave and act the way he believed was true, so as a child I thought that was the best atitude that ones can have. And i started mimicing his avenue with my friends, and I obligated them to do as I say. Fortuantly, becuase my mom was teaching at that school too, she saw the way i behave, therefor she asked my older sister to obligate me to do some tasks they gave me to. Therefor i become aware how my atitude was wrong and i never did that agian and apologized to my friend. As you can see my teacher revealing had a real bad impact on my behavoir.
Secoundly , In countries like mine that we don't have freedom of expressing our social and political view point. if a teacher makes known her/his point of view he may be making some trouble for her/him self. As an instance, my mother who is teacher had a colleage who was ingenious but did a mistake and reveal her point to her student in the classrome and there was a student in her class that went home and discribed for his parents what his teacher assert in class. Unfortuantly his parents were police so the next day he was in jail because of only some revealings.
Finally, although some people think if a teachers reveal their openon on a specefic problem the student will have more perception on that topic, but it can be no good for them because they will face that topic soon or later and if they don't mimic some one they will have their pure opinion and society will have more unique people.
To sum up, teachers teaches so many diffrent stuffs to student but they should let the students to have their unique opinion on important issues like social and politicals ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Pros
...olitical views known to their students. pros and cons will be discused below so peop...
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Line 2, column 592, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he best atitude that ones can have. And i started mimicing his avenue with my fri...
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Line 2, column 752, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing at that school too, she saw the way i behave, therefor she asked my older sis...
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Line 2, column 855, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...do some tasks they gave me to. Therefor i become aware how my atitude was wrong a...
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Line 2, column 951, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...that agian and apologized to my friend. As you can see my teacher revealing had a ...
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Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...al bad impact on my behavoir. Secoundly , In countries like mine that we dont hav...
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Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...oundly , In countries like mine that we dont have freedom of expressing our social a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ng our social and political view point. if a teacher makes known her/his point of ...
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Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'policed'.
Suggestion: policed
...in class. Unfortuantly his parents were police so the next day he was in jail because ...
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Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a teacher' or simply 'teachers'?
Suggestion: a teacher; teachers
... Finally, although some people think if a teachers reveal their openon on a specefic probl...
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Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ce that topic soon or later and if they dont mimic some one they will have their pur...
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Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...ic soon or later and if they dont mimic some one they will have their pure opinion and s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5303030303 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36868753718 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510822510823 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5348429002 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.277777778 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188262260788 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761275274337 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804750056777 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126320428855 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632922904346 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.