TPO 32
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Nowadays, the world is different from than it was in the past. There are numerous technological advancements that did not exist in the past. Some people hold an underlying idea that the people don't enjoy their lives than the people in the past did; however, others may take and opposite view and believe that people now are more satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Personally, I contend that the life is more enjoyable than it was before. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint by bringing up some cogent reasons.
The first exquisite reason that comes to the mind at the first glance is the fact that technology advancement has facilitated our lives. Nowadays, we use washing machines and dishwashers to wash our clothes and dishes respectively. Consequently, we have more free time than the people in the past had. People use this free time to enjoy their lives. For example, 60 years ago, my grandfather had to work on a farm to help his parents to feed their children. People needed to cook food, walk to far distances and wash their dishes and clothes on their own. Nowadays, people have plenty of time to be with their family, make friends and do the activities that they like. As another example, one of my friends like skydiving, so he attended two different skydiving programs and he made a multiplicity new friends. Now, he believes that he is happier than he was a year ago.
Another equally noteworthy point substantiating my stance is that we now have a multiplicity of ways to entertain ourselves which didn't exist 50 years ago. Now, when we are bored, we can watch TV, surf the Internet, or call our friends and talk to them. However, the only way that my grandfather could entertain himself was to play with other kids. He once told me that they even didn't have a ball or another toy to play with. Moreover, a research conducted by psychologists at Harvard University in 2014 revealed that people that have access to the internet and other ways of communication live happier lives than the ones who don't have access to the modern ways of communication.
To encapsulate, based on the aforementioned reasons, one can soon infer that the life in the contemporary period is more enjoyable than the life in the past was. However, this essay was a story in a nutshell, and there are numerous momentous reasons that weren't mentioned above. In the end, it is highly recommended that a research be conducted to identify other points that make our lives easier and more satisfactory.
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'as to', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216768916155 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.179959100204 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0633946830266 0.0866891130778 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0531697341513 0.046263068375 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.079754601227 0.0685040099705 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110429447853 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0224948875256 0.0351676179071 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72346457101 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0347648261759 0.0309702414327 112% => OK
Particles: 0.00204498977505 0.00188951952338 108% => OK
Determiners: 0.0899795501022 0.0887237588012 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0102249488753 0.0209618222197 49% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0163599182004 0.0139019557991 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2542.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 441.0 408.028673835 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7641723356 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.283446712018 0.338922669872 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.213151927438 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167800453515 0.174417080927 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120181405896 0.112833075102 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72346457101 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501133786848 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 56.6553968264 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0454545455 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5584483777 48.84282405 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.545454545 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0454545455 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.409090909091 0.644075263715 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 41.3606472892 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.11764705882 1.45489161554 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348467649285 0.300154397459 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129460907761 0.103427244359 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0708382765815 0.0752933317313 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.472002511608 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13381878048 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12903612739 0.114077575197 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102397001574 0.0781384742642 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.369917678659 0.336927656856 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0442088797934 0.067059652881 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259784773102 0.210909579961 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100473141501 0.0618886996521 162% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.