TPO- 35-2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the down of the humanity, paying attention to the morality plays crucial rules in the fundation of the healthy societies. One of thoes fundamental could be respect to privecy of the people. Neither are they famuse or common, I pesonaly subscribe to the view that we have to respect to the privecy. In the following paragraphs my reasons will be elaborated on in more detail.
To begin with, I cannot deny the fact that athletes or acters are in the center of attention for individuals, specifecally, young people. In fact, they were mimic as a well-known and proggressive people who are desirable for others. However, their proivecy should preserve, respecting to the morality. To delve more intio it, there are lots of life, which are ruined by people who do not respect to the human manners and deprive others from passionat and love
with their miss jugments. Take the life of the acterss as an example. several years ago, some people spearded pictures of famous acters in the media, resulting in destroying her personal profational life. there was a disaster becouse after that she suicided. people did not pay attention to the consequenses, as a mather of fact, they killed her with their higments and disrespecting to the privet life of others.
The second reason why I beilive that we should respect more to the pricey of others is that for the societies that want to foster and growing, it would be neseccery to make a perfect situation for their elits to improve withot so much bothering around them, which can distractive them to achieve sucssess. generally speaking, pay to much attentom to the prive life of the people would limit the focuse of them to their goals. For example, the athlete who should pracrice during the week several hours, have something happen for them in the social medi, they would lose their concentraton on the practicing.
Drawing upon the rasons that I mentioned above, I beilive that there is very seliant issue, we should resoect more to the private life of the prople. Not only does this practice found morality for healthy societies, but also improve the chance of the adepts to nurture in the situation without any missjugments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, well, for example, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90026954178 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60349733178 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55525606469 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4252295358 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.941176471 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8235294118 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0984413577651 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310917320383 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340491190083 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0537068560754 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024773279322 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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