TPO-41- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Education is a big part of children growing life style. Governments invest educating , schools and teachers more and more. Teachers have the most important role in educating. teachers train the next generation of country and make them useful for society. they built the basic of the future. I disagree with this statement that they were more valuable in the past. I believe they are valued by parents, students and governments. There is a lot of reasons for this claim, which two of them, which have great importance elaborate here under.
First, nowadays teachers should teach more subjects than the past. the schedule of the students are full of interesting topics such as creativity and music that help students to find their favorite one. As a result teacher have to master in more areas and be to patient to interest the pupils. So, the governments should spend more money to teachers to guaranty: firstly,the teacher feel valuable in society and, second, they can spend their whole time only for getting the skills are essential for teaching. For instance, in my country the governments prepare great options for teachers to buy house, car and using the sportive option.
Moreover, teachers are more friendlier than before. they are kind, patient and have good connection skills. So, they can easily communicate with students. Therefore, they be loved more than past and, students respect them a lot. Parents are aware of this relationship and appriciate it. For example, my friends daughter go to an elementry school and adore her teacher. When she come back home from school, she describes great moments about learning process and, she is eager about the next day. My friend always feel happy about the teacher and valued her so much. She says that today student learn deeper and the parents need to spend fewer time to train them at home.
To sum up, teacher are important for society and for future. They can change the destiny of children and make a great and successful generation. in my option people respect teachers more than ever. Because they teach more fields to students and gain better skills, for this reason government spend more on them, and, they are friendly with students and they feel comfortable during the learning process and bring the respect up between both students and parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98449612403 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41882095523 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529715762274 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2319964048 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1923076923 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8846153846 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26923076923 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227158581186 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750059355 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700016611357 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157997590674 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350658352499 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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