TPO 42
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People spend a lot of their life's time in the work environment. In my opinion, the worker should spend that time in a job that makes him satisfied with himself. I believe that working in a position that requires the employee to deal with different tasks is better than working in a position that has a stable routine for the whole day. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, if the worker is responsible to deal with various kinds of tasks, this would give him the opportunity to gain new skills. On the other hand, if the worker is only required to do the same thing every days, he would not obtain any new skills. Moreover, when the worker is asked to accomplish different targets in his duty, he would face challenges and in order to overcome these challenges, he would be forced to learn new things and expanse his knowledge. As a result, this kind of worker is more qualified than other workers.
For example, if an administrative in a company is only responsible for meeting's arrangement, he will become used to do that without any challenge. But if the same worker is also responsible for entering data, dealing with customers, and contacting other companies he will have a very good experience.
Secondly, when the worker dealing with multiple tasks every day, he has to deal with different people. As a result, he will be able to make new networks. Also, dealing with individuals from different backgrounds daily would enhance the communication skills of the worker. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I used to work in Cafe three years ago, and my job tasks included preparing coffee for customers, purchasing materials for the shop, scheduling the delivery orders and contacting a marketing company. Even if these job tasks seem simple, I earned a really good experience in different aspects.
To conclude, when a worker is required to do different tasks every day, his work experience will not be limited as if he only required repeat the same task all every days. This is because he will have the chance to obtain various skills, expand his networks, and improves his communication skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, i feel, kind of, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83289124668 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70635553176 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480106100796 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4487702946 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.222222222 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18279007565 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609144402999 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530419981937 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109268219766 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388150006857 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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