TPO 42
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that work plays the key role in people's live. No one can deny the effects of working on our daily activities. A controversial question often raised regarding this issue whether doing several tasks or focusing on similar tasks all day long. Some people believe that it is better to have different types of tasks However, some people take an opposing viewpoint and believe it is better to do the similar tasks. From my own perspective, the first belief is preferable. In the following paragraphs I will pinpoint the prominent reasons.
First of all, one should take into accounts this significant fact that doing similar things can make people bored. As matter of fact, when people just focus on things they are less enthusiastic and less exited. To illustrate, take for example the student who are preparing for Tofel exam. If she just study vocabulary all they not only it cannot be efficient enough but also she will be reluctant to continue studying. on the if she spends her day by listening to podcast reading magazines and also practicing with her friend she will definitely get better results.
In approaching the issue, one should regard another point that involving in different activity can improve people skills in different areas. In other words, each task will improve people in one aspect therefore, when they try doing distinctive activity they will improve their skills in many areas.
Admittedly, focussing in one task has some benefits. when people concentrate on only one thing they can be better in that specific job in an easier way. For example when computer engineer only develop a software based on only one language like java. Despite that he may feel bored just coding one language and also don't learn other languages he will be skilled in java. besides. because he can spend all of his time learn and improve his skill in java, it will be easier for him to be specialist in java programing
Actually there are some other reasons and examples, supporting these claims, which I have refrained from mentioning above. All in all although concerting in one task has some advantages being involved in different job can avoid people to be tired moreover it help them to have better skills in different aspect of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for example, no doubt, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8984375 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.505039138 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.094948474 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233123130121 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699895916535 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674776066228 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136172718775 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346660289889 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.