tpo 45
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with this statement. any thing about life in the past is different of living today. in the past, children had to follow their father's job but today they do not have to for following their family business. so they can have their own job in any subject. many of people who lived in the past did not have academic educations because they thought that is unnecessary and all of things that they need is learning about their family jobs. today children are going to university, college and proceed their interests about their job in future. life is going to progress so fast and life condition change in short times therefore some parents may have not enough information for decision for their children' life in other way children and young people have very tendency to being update in every thing that relate to new life. so today the young people and children are better able to make decision about their own lives. we all know about how today' life is complicate than past and decisions which parents made for their children in the past were the best in that time but now every thing is changed and parents do not want to make decision for their children because they think children should make decision on their own and find own way by own self. also today minds have changed and children do not accept some decision or all of decisions that their parents make.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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I agree with this statement. any thing about life in the past is different of ...
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... the past is different of living today. in the past, children had to follow their ...
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...to for following their family business. so they can have their own job in any subj...
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Suggestion: Many
... can have their own job in any subject. many of people who lived in the past did not...
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Suggestion: Today
...ed is learning about their family jobs. today children are going to university, colle...
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Suggestion: in the future
...proceed their interests about their job in future. life is going to progress so fast and ...
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...ir interests about their job in future. life is going to progress so fast and life c...
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Suggestion: So
...in every thing that relate to new life. so today the young people and children are...
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...to make decision about their own lives. we all know about how today life is compli...
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...es. we all know about how today life is complicate than past and decisions which parents m...
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Suggestion: Also
...their own and find own way by own self. also today minds have changed and children d...
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Suggestion: also,
...their own and find own way by own self. also today minds have changed and children d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 245.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57959183673 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13780161656 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473469387755 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.426744093 48.9658058833 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.2 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403125425366 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197114898601 0.076458572812 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110409777305 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.403125425366 0.150856017488 267% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 86.8835125448 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.