TPO 46- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The world is changing rapidly and people experience a huge improvement and development in several fields of science and engineering. In fact, they adjust themselves with these changes to live comfortably. When it comes to the impact of the opinions of celebrities on people, controversy surrounds the issue of whether it is more important to younger people than to older people? I am of the opinion that youths today do not find the attitudes of the celebrities important for their life and they follow different things like technology and new changes in the world instead. The following explanation will further elaborate on this perspective.
One of the significant aspects of the ongoing discussion which demands a keen contemplation is that young people have other priorities to do in their life. They have to attend several classes and also study hard for their class assignments so that they can broaden their knowledge to understand the world better. Thus, they have no time to keep up with other people's life or opinions. Take my personal experience for example. When I was in the high school, I rarely find enough time to watch TV or read newspaper to get the news even some time I had no time to talk to my parents just because of too many tasks teachers gave me to do.
Another noteworthy aspect of the topic which needs to be reflected is that modern technology changes the attitudes of the youngsters toward the life. As a matter of fact, they have more tendencies to keep the pace with the modern inventions rather than other matters. Furthermore, young people have a great chance to know all information related to renowned people by using the internet and this unfolds many things, especially, other people's attitudes about them, so they recognize that there are many negative points in their lives and they should not follow these people.
Paradoxically, age factor can be considered as the main reason that youths somehow are affected by the celebrity’s opinions. In essence, they always think that celebrities are the ones who determine the fashion of the society, and they find their life more interesting because most of the celebrities are in their ages. In this regard, they imitate their styles of clothing or other things to keep up with the fashion.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I think that there are many convincing reasons for the fact that young people today do not follow celebrities opinions because they cannot find enough time to deal with other things and also they have more inclination to be informed with the technology changes and the new discoveries rather than other people's attitudes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, thus, even so, for example, i think, in fact, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2208.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95067264574 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70429986292 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482062780269 0.524837075471 92% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.7961006169 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.882352941 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2352941176 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200243477944 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706453412165 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626330174438 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132212735884 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582879532172 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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