TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Nowadays, people strive to show their best performance in their works. Everyone has his or her own personal method to achieve this goal. In this regard, a controversial question that arises is that whether ones, especially youth, need to have a plan and be organize since the modern life is very sophisticated or not. I concur with this notion, and I will explain my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, having plan and being organize is very reliable to complete our tasks in the best manner. Nowadays, people have been facing a plethora of unpredictable issues that they need to manage appropriately. Because considering these events are very challenging, people can dwindle these issues impact on their performance by having a plan about other tasks that are routine. By doing so, they can manage these tasks, which consist most of individuals' daily program more reliably and without any stress. Furthermore, they can allocate some time to unpredictable tasks in their daily plan. On the other hand, it is evident that without having plan managing all of these challenging issues are very risky and sometime impossible.
In addition, people would be prepared for their future life. If we ask our parents about their experiences that how is adult life, we will be aware that managing all the issues are not simple and it needs to spend lot of energy. Therefore, having a ability to manage our tasks when we are adolescents would be a first step in our life to make ourselves ready to the future more challenging events. On the other hand, if young people do not know how they can handle their tasks, they will face numerous problems in their future. Furthermore, they can use their parents’ experiences and make themselves more undependable in the future.
To wrap it up, I am of the opinion that having the ability to plan and organize our tasks is very imperative for youth. Not only do they reach their goals and complete their tasks more reliably, but also they prepare themselves for their future life. It is highly recommended that parents contemplate this vital point and teach their children this ability in their childhood.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ewpoint in the following paragraphs. To begin with, having plan and being org...
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...y can manage these tasks, which consist most of individuals daily program more reliably and without...
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... very risky and sometime impossible. In addition, people would be prepared fo...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... spend lot of energy. Therefore, having a ability to manage our tasks when we are...
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...ildren this ability in their childhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in addition, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9532967033 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67399439887 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491758241758 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6476671444 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.166666667 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206094809406 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763233531382 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547015745801 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135278918891 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274601824228 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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