TPO 48
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that modern life is very complicated. No one can deny how much it is complex. one controversial question regarding this issue is whether it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. some people believe that it is absolutely important for young people to have plans in their lives. However, some other may take an opposing viewpoint and believe it is not that important to plan. From my own perspective, the first belief is preferable. As far I'm concerned, without plan no success will be achieved by young people. In the following paragraphs I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
First of all, one should take to account this significant fact that planing would offer a map which can direct people to desirable life. As a matter of fact, without using plan, not only people doesn't have a general route for their daily activities but also they may lead to unpredictable life. to illustrate, take the example of a student who is preparing for Tofel exam. if she has plan and be organized for exam and set what she should read and study every day, she can be more successful.
Approaching this issue, apart from the fact mentioned above, one should regard another point that in nowadays life people are limited, especially in time, therefore, if they don't organize their life and don't plan to use their time in efficient way they wouldn't be able to achieve their goals in their life.
Even though the ability to plan is unquestionably essential for anyone, I also think it is very important for people to handle a situation happens unpredictably. In other word because the world is so complicated it is possible to change and unpredictable things happen, therefore I believe that every person should have the ability to adapt to new circumstances.
Actually there are some other reasons and examples, supporting these claims, which I have refrained from. All in all, I strongly think in the modern world, people must be capable to plan to navigate their lives and also use their time as best as they can, however, needless to say, it is surely valuable for people to be able to adapt themselves to changes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, apart from, no doubt, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83155080214 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67027709516 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521390374332 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9032945449 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.294117647 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254674405022 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877744678559 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644310069021 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142544202542 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605254301329 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.