TPO 49
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my opinion, it is better to make many new friends in instead of having few friends for a long period because a large number of friends make our relationships less boring and tedious and a wide range of friends could provide an extensive social network which could be beneficial in many aspects like job finding. In addition, if a misunderstanding would occur in friendships, we can make other new friends it is not necessary to have long friendships with few people.
First of all, the point and purpose in social interactions and making friends is that we want to have fun and spend an enjoyable time with our friends. If we make friends with few people for a long time, we may get bored gradually; because we may not have many interests in common and we may not match in many aspects. So, they may enjoy and spend time on those activities in which we are not interested. For example, many people like play soccer on filed or by video games while I like to go to bodybuilding or ping pong. After a while, typically I would get bored because I do not enjoy their favorite activities especially if I would not be able to make new friends. By contrast, if I would be able to do so, I can find people who have the same entertainment interests as mine. Thus, I will cement a good an enjoyable friendship with them that will make me happier.
Second, if we make few friends for a long time, we would not be able to establish a useful social network. This social network could be helpful for many things. For example, if we make a lot of friends, we may interact and set up a relationship who have good contacts in my business or job. If I am seeking a job after leaving my current job, he can introduce me as a new employee or client. Otherwise, a limited number of friends cannot result in such benefits for us. As a result, we would be happier if we would have nice friends who help us to find a job, find a scholarship for college or help in dangerous situations.
All in all, I think we should cement appropriate and useful friendships whenever and wherever it was possible; for example in college, new work environment etc. In general, in addition to the mentioned benefits, making a lot of friends also other social phycological benefits about which I had not the opportunity to discuss.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...g few friends for a long period because a large number of friends make our relationships less bor...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
...ppier if we would have nice friends who help us to find a job, find a scholarship for college o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, thus, while, for example, i think, in addition, in general, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46428571429 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70799082083 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454761904762 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0681740242 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.294117647 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7058823529 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203981355387 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772791208243 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476611873253 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139992570814 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530745563167 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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