TPO 51: Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Media is considered as the most influential tool in recent society to which the young generations are involved more than others. Movies and television are the main sources of media which has various effects to this delicate members of society. The question is whether they have bad effects on young people behavior or not. From my point of view, their possitive effects outweigh their negative ones provided that they are chosed correctly. There are main contributors to my stand point including their special design for young generation, their safe way of entertaining juveniles and their easy accessing.
As a threshold matter, there are a lot of movie makers who target the juveniles to produce movies for. They search deeply about the requirements a movie should have to captivate the youngesters attention. In other words, the film makers who produce films for young generations try their best to provide some thing that is compatible with their moods which also guide them how to treat well in the society.
Furthermore, it is appropriate movies and television that provides young people with a low risk entertainment. For instance, there are several types of games and hobbies that have various kind of hazards for young generations like travelling with firends. Although a trip with a group of friends seems to be attractive, it is accompanied with perils threathening youngesters safety.
Last but not least, that the movies and television are easy to access in anytime and anwhere makes it as a convinient tool to learn juveniles some important aspects of life. However, other ways of learning and entertaining requires special tools like computers or cars and so forth. Therefore, teenagers are able to take advantage of the media broadcasted form television without paying alot of money or providing any infrustructre.
In succinct, media plays an stellar role in the formation of young peoples' behavior. Asserted that the benefits are more than the disavantageous, if am not agreed that they overally have impacts on their reactions. Accurate design of these programs, safe charecteritic of them and available resources are all support my idea.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2183908046 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84740391875 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0782025104 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.823529412 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210358381094 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701285869624 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493229846806 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10713856557 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515870309406 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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