TPO 57: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
All of the human in the world need to have leisure time so as to relax and diminish stress level. This process happens variously from people to people. There is a heated controversy among people about the ways to feel relax and get rid of any distress. Although numbers of people support that real relaxing is not possible without being in a group, I extremely insist on the opposite idea. According to my experience, the best way to decline stress is staying in solitude for some time. Having enough time to think and staying away from any disturbance are two major contributors to my stand point well illustrated as follows.
As a threshold matter, it is in loneliness that individuals find ample time to think about themselves, taken decisions and any negative occurrence in the past. Actually, the first key to find tranquility is refining thoughts. No one is free of any fatigue unless he solves the problems in his mind. In other words, after throwing away the distracting thoughts from the mind people can reach to calmness. This circumstance is available only in ones' loneliness; therefore, whoever is exhausted from daily tasks should first find a quite place and concentrate. Yoga exercises, for instance, are really practical in such situations.
Furthermore, those who really seek for relaxation should avoid any disturbance from outside. What I consider as a main disturb is people's interference to our leisure time. While there are a high population around, you should take care of your words and pay attention to what others state. Under this circumstance, feeling eased and relaxed seems infeasible. However, being free of any distracting factors, people are able to highly enjoy reading a book or doing sports.
In succinct, that relaxing and declining stress is rooted in spending time alone is considered as my view point. Whereas some people are in favor of groups for relaxation, I prefer the solitude. Appropriate situation to think and elimination of any distraction are the points presented in the writing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
All of the human in the world need to have leisure...
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Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... in the world need to have leisure time so as to relax and diminish stress level. This p...
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Line 2, column 444, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... This circumstance is available only in ones loneliness; therefore, whoever is exhau...
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Line 2, column 528, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('quite') instead an adjective, or a noun ('place') instead of another adjective.
...sted from daily tasks should first find a quite place and concentrate. Yoga exercises, for in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, however, really, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05357142857 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81237244609 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610119047619 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9420109875 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.9 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12784078254 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378426565879 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046899430466 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800177136078 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044831412193 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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